Jul 27, 2006
another scene--first draft as always
(Sound of crickets. CELISE digs while SABRINA and ADELE relax and drink beer. They are more casual, sans hardhats. There is a body, DAVID, lying nearby.)
C
I don’t know why I always have to do the hard work, just because I’m the strongest. Yes, I have amazing genes which give me huge bulging muscles. I have terrific endurance. I’m seemingly tireless. I’m like a machine carved out of steel and iron and set to maximum efficiency at all times but why does that mean that I have to do all the heavy work?
A
Keep digging.
C
Isn’t that deep enough?
A
No, no. Keep going.
C
That’s plenty big. It’ll fit.
S
No. She’s right. It’s got to be deeper.
C
I hate you both.
S
Why me?
C
I dunno. Cause you’re there?
S
Yeah I hate myself too. (takes a drink)
(Pause)
C
So Adele, you going to tell us or what?
A
Do you really want to hear?
C
It’ll pass the time.
S
I mean you have to tell the story.
A
Alright, alright. First let me say I’m sorry or whatever. I shouldn’t have done it. Right. And now that that’s out of the way… I was provoked. I was provoked over and over and I just had enough. Last night he comes over and he goes right to the refrigerator without a hello and drinks my orange juice right from the carton. I yell at him to get a glass and so he pours it in a glass, drains the glass and then he leaves it in the sink. I can’t tell you how many times I’ve asked him not to leave the glass in the sink.
S
So what did you do?
A
I picked up the glass, smashed it on the table and used the biggest shard to slit his throat. He didn’t even see it coming.
C
That’s messy.
A
I know. Took me forever to clean up all the glass and blood.
S
Did he scream?
A
He gurgled.
S
Well, that’s something.
C
Is it deep enough now?
A
Let’s give it a shot.
(ADELE and SABRINA pick up the body and put it in the hole.)
A
That should be ok.
C
I guess you want me to fill it in now.
A
Could you?
C
I hate you both.
(CELISE begins filling in the hole)
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