inch by inch

I've been stuck on this new play stuck stuck stuck but i managed to get a little more done today so i don't feel so bad and i read over what i have so far and i actually like it. this could actually work.

Here is a piece I have to take out because it doesn't fit the world I'm trying to create. i kind of like it, and it also makes me cringe at the same time. in any case it's just not going to work.

DOG I want to believe in evolution. Dogs are getting smarter. We are working on having opposable thumbs. So we can pick things up. And write things down. It is so hard to read books now. But we are getting smarter and we are working on developing technology. Actually we may just take your technology and make improvements. Like the Japanese. Or the dolphins.